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David walked for two days to Edinburgh, until that he found the way to Cramond. When he began to ask about the House of Shaws, he discovered that is an unpopular place. His uncle Ebenezer is very hated in the community His uncle said that he should go to the ship, where he is kidnapped. The ship officer must kill... mostrar más David walked for two days to Edinburgh, until that he found the way to Cramond. When he began to ask about the House of Shaws, he discovered that is an unpopular place. His uncle Ebenezer is very hated in the community

His uncle said that he should go to the ship, where he is kidnapped. The ship officer must kill him but he didn’t do because he needed her help. The ship had hit a rock and they leaved the ship and tried to go to land. David tried to swim to Earraid where is alone

David arrived to a island where he is witness of a murder, and the assassin begin to search to him. David finds to Alan and they escape to the jungle where the two travel of return to Queensferry

There in Queensferry a lawyer help to David to trick to his uncle Ebenezer doing that admit the kidnapping. David could get his portion of the fortune of the Shaws and help the clansman of Alan
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